Hi Guys!
Happy hump day!
This weeks Snippet is from Beauty and the Beast. Demon Tale
I hope you like it x
Cally lay trembling on her bed. Her head throbbed painfully where her beloved horns had been rasped until all that remained were bloody open wounds hidden by her hair. The pain had not quite gone from the raw nerve endings, but the bleeding had finally stopped. Soon all sign of her horns would be gone, and that was what hurt Cally the most. Now she looked just like the human her mother wanted her to be. No signs of her demon half remained.
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I’m hooked! Thanks for the excerpt!
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YEY! No probs x
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Great hook!
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Cheers
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That strikes me as very sad-her pain, her becoming what her mother wanted to be instead of who she really is. I connected with her physical and emotional suffering.
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This is so nice to hear! Yeah, she is very sad at this moment x
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Nicely done!!! Absolutely hooked.
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Thanks buddy!
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Totally hooked. This one is at the top of my TBB pile!! 🙂
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Thank you Sara!!! YEYZ!!!
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Once again…I’m hooked!
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Aww, poor thing. Nice snippet!
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*shudders* an intense snippet, Kerrianne. A great hook!
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Thank you x
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WOW, so much emotion on different levels going on here. Powerful paragraph.
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Great hook, well done!
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Wow. I’m intrigued as to why someone wanted to remove her horns. Thanks for sharing. 🙂
C.R.
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Poor girl. I truly felt for her. 😥 Nice hook but sad.
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Sounds very painful, too lose half of who you are. Nice snippet. I’m left wondering if she’ll get her demon half back.
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so SHE’S the beast. Brilliant!
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She was a demon?? Excellent!
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Oh, poor thing!
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I’m sensing several issues here described in a very short snippet, brilliant! Great hook.
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How heartbreaking, I could feel her pain. Nicely written.
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Beautiful writing and so sad.
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