Hi Everyone !
Hope you are all well. Thanks for popping by again, I don’t think I can say enough times that I really appreciate all of your comments and support. *Hugs you all*
Here is a little snippet from a WIP of mine called (tentatively) ‘Hot Wheels’ Its an erotic short story about English Bikers – hope you like it xx
“I’m sorry – I -, “ she turned and faced the door, mortification burning the backs of her eyes, the need to run, trembled through her arms and legs. “I don’t do stuff like this,” she dropped her gaze and took a step towards the door.
“Stay.”
His deep voice and the command in his tone stopped her in her tracks, she looked back over her shoulder and swallowed.
“I never thought for a second that you were cheap, or easy, Sammy. I am sorry if I gave you that impression.”
The man was intense, his eyes trapped her, the dark, heavy looks he gave – especially now, sent shivers down her spine…
Love this snippet, get emotion underlying their desires. Great six!
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Thank you xx
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Ooo, so evocative in such a short span. Well done!
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*Blushes* Thank you xx
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awww…i love the hero’s repsonse
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He’s a sweetie x
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I love an intense stare like that. Great six! 🙂
Hip bump!
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So much emotion going on is such a small sample!
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Thanks xx
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Aw, I love the emotion in this. I swear I can hear his gentle tone. Love it!
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Hot six…and I love the title!
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Do you? i am not sure about it… Thanks xx
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Tense, sexy six. He seems like a pretty sweet guy. 🙂
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He is – just misunderstood.
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I love this six! Nicely done!
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Oooo…great six, I want to read more! 🙂
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Lots of emotion packed in a short snippet! Nice job!
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Oh…nice! Like her uncertainty and the dialogue. Such tight sexy tension.
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Yum. True alphas can, and do apologize! Love it.
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Wow. He better not be lying to her! His look would melt any heart.
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Yay for shivers down a girl’s spine!
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ooh this is amazing x
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Hey Kerrianne! I’ve been meaning to jump on and comment but for some reason I cannot access your comment box remotely. I always read your SSS posts! Anyway, I’m finally at my laptop and can respond properly. LOL!
Very sexy six! I love her reaction to his speaking just one word. Very nice.
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Took me a moment to get to the six – I was so distracted by the picture… 😉
Great six – looking forward to next Sunday!
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I want to read more! Very compelling emotion!
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