Hi Sixsunday Peeps!!!!
This is from my newly finished and subb’d erotic story ‘Running Home’ …
“You don’t fucking tell me what to do, when I am the man holding the gun to your chin –. “
Peter’s rant was cut off by the sound of the front door banging open. Tom dropped his gaze and almost died on the spot when he saw Jo standing, framed by the massive oak structure with a carving knife gripped in her shaking hands.
Tom stared in horror at the state of his beautiful little Jo. Her dark hair was matted with blood, the usually silken strands looked brittle and dull. Bruises marred her perfect face, and the wild, broken expression in her eyes made his heart crack into a thousand pieces.
Very emotional! All the best with this sub! 🙂
Coup de hanche!
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ROFL! Coup de hanche et tou! thanks xx
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Emotional, descriptive and action packed. Amazing six.
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Why, thank you xx
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broken expression in her eyes…beautifully written six! Great job.
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Vivid!
Bonne chance sur la soumission.
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Merci bien, Taryn xx
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Love it. Thanks for sharing.
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Wow, that is an emotional and intense six. Good luck with the submission!!!
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Thank you so much xx
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Really vivid! Great emotion.
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WOWWWWWWWWWW!
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;-D
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Lots of tension and emotion. Best wishes with the submission!
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Tense, lots of action!
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Oh noes! Get the bad guy!
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Intriguing!
=)
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Good luck with the submission.
Intense six and love the description of Jo. Looks like Pete made a mistake coming there and beating her up
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Thanks xx Yep, he certainly did! ;-D
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Wow! Fabulous six.
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So heart-breaking… I hope he takes good care of her!
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Sounds like an emotional roller-coaster. Great six lines.
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Great emotion! Good luck with the submission.
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Wow, she’s a survivor! I hope she’ll save the day. Amazing scene.
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Oh wow. I could absolutely feel the tension of that scene. Can’t wait to see what happens next. Very dangerous.
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Wow! Riveting scene. I can’t wait to read more!
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Intense six! Really enjoyed it and would love to read more.
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Love his reaction to seeing her in such a state. Good luck on the sub!
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Sounds like Jo has been in a rough place. Good descriptions in this six.
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Totally drawn in…I want to read more! Good luck with your submission! 🙂
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Extremely gripping! Great six, and good luck on the sub!
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Uhm, uh, oh… what’s Peter going to do now… point the gun at Jo or Tom?
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