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Six Sunday.
Hi. this is my six for this week. Connor and Lexi again. From my NaNo book ‘Dead Possession’
“Come with me Lexi. I will protect you.”
Connor was shocked to hear a sob escape from Lexi- the lethal little fighter. His heart throbbed as her shoulders sagged and she shook her head.
“It isn’t that easy.” She shoved at his chest with a flat hand, but this time Connor refused to move. Lexi looked up at him, her green eyes so full of pain that he ached to help her
“I have to stay here. I cant leave”
The agony in those few whispered words rocked his body and shook his temper like nothing ever before….
That’s my six. If you want to see the rest of the Brilliant offerings on the #sixsunday list go to http://sixsunday.blogspot.com/
Kerrianne Coombes 
>I love your description of Lexi as "the lethal little fighter." Can't wait to read more.
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>I agree with Jessica, love the description. Another great six 🙂
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>Oh, that last line of speech put a lump in my throat – why can't she leave? 😥
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>Great hook! I love it!
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>Very intriguing and I completely agree about the great description.
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>I'm with everyone else, that is an awesome description!
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>Great snippet! I'm intrigued and I want to know what happens next!! Maybe next week we'll get to find out.
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>Aww poor Lexi. Great 6, Kerrianne 🙂
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>Now I want to know why she can't leave 🙂
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>I'm hooked!
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>Awesome snippet. Can't wait to read what happens next.
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>Yep, hooked. Need to know what's holding this lethal fighter against her will.
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>Awesome! Interesting ….
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>Totally hooked! I want more. Good job
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>Really great! I don't know what else to say. Nice stuff!
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>I love that you can really feel the connection between them. She's all hurt and vulnerable and you can see how it's tearing him apart.
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>I love his feelings of anger that arise from not understanding why she can't leave when he feels he can protect her. His frustration is beautifully drawn. Great work.
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>Lots of emotion in only six sentences. Want more!
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>can't wait to see what comes next!
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>Aww. I feel badly for her!
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>I'm intrigued by Lexi's internal turmoil… very powerful!
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>Great Snippet~
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>Very intense snippet.
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